Saturday, August 27, 2011

Breathe.


Break bricks around you
Move out of the labyrinth
Breathe once and live twice.

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Written for : Haiku Heights
Image Courtesy : deviantart

15 comments:

  1. Live twice - that's my kinda life.

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  2. "Breathe Once and Live Twice"... :D Beautiful! I have read Haiku for real on your Blog...and I must say, I find it tough to come up with something like you do... :D :D Amazing...!

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  3. Love the ending line :) So well said, and powerful. Thanks for the prompt this week, Vinati! :)

    My post - Patiently Trying

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  4. breaking those bricks can be tough but worth it in the end! I liked this creative Haiku well done!

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  5. @All

    Thanks a lot for appreciating it. :) :)

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  6. Great thoughts to live by Love your Haiku and image.

    Melanie

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  7. @Cassiopeia Rises

    Thank you! :)

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  8. Beautiful, and, PERFECT :D


    Cheers
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  9. @Blasphemous Aesthete

    =) Thanks!

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  10. Haiku are my things..
    A good one always melts in without resistance, like this one
    and besides, they are short too :P

    aJ

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  11. And stop surviving. Because only breathing ain't living.
    Love love it again <3

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  12. @ Crystal

    I'm glad you loved it. :) :*

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