Saturday, August 10, 2013

Prompt: Ocean



abysmal
ocean in those eyes
lurking life within
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3-5-5 pattern

Written for: Haiku Heights

8 comments:

  1. There seems to be lots of mysteries behind those eyes. Nicely Mirage!

    Hank

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  2. awesome! deep and full of feelings :)

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  3. ocean in the eyes...full of life...
    love the haiku

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  4. deepest secrets hidden in the eyes.

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  5. I fell in love with those eyes...
    And this haiku..!!!

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