Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Twisted Mind

And then he stopped tracing for a while,
the seamless chaos of her twisted mind.
Everything quietened
the howling of dogs,
the chirping of sleepless birds
and the night sky.. it stayed
like a blank thought hovering without words.
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22 comments:

  1. so interesting. reading this i feel like there are at least 3 more layers beneath the words.

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    1. Written words keep the imagination open. I feel so good you that could read through the lines. :)

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  2. Sheer beauty! I hibernated in this phase for a long long time, sometime back.

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    1. It is kind of peaceful and unsettling at the same time.

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  3. this is really good! really enjoyed "the seamless chaos of her twisted mind" - excellent stuff!

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    1. Coming from you Freya, it makes me feel so happy. Thank you!

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  4. it's as if i can feel that emotion of expectancy. beautiful as always love xo

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    1. Thankyou!!! And also for getting in touch again because I'd almost lost you.

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  5. Seriously, How do you accommodate so many levels in your writing! Such a talent.

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    1. xox

      It's just old me growing into a new me.

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  6. The last line blew my mind!

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  7. How do you even get such ideas? Too good.

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    1. That was just my twisted mind working.

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  8. maybe there's something in our souls no one can really reveal.xx

    dreaming is believing

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    1. Let's keep that something unadulterated and just for ourselves. :)

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  9. This will keep me awake for a while now....I like this verse a lot.

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