Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Prompt: Home


september morning
mist on old window panes
winter comes home
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Written for: Haiku Horizons
Picture source: pinterest

P.S: I haven't followed the common 5-7-5 structure.. just.. like.. that! ^.^

36 comments:

  1. Outstanding blog girl, at such a young age...you should be proud of yourself !!! :) 3 cheers :)

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    1. Thanks a lot for your super generous words.. :D

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  2. Even without the 5-7-5 rule, this haiku is very sweet!

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    1. Thank you Ankita.. it is kind of relieving to ignore the rules for a while.

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  3. Such a pretty picture you paint :)

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  4. mmm so good. i've missed you, i've missed your words so dearly.

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    1. Kayla!!! Where have you been? I couldn't access your blog for so long. Hope everything is okay at your end.

      I've missed you too! Thank you for dropping by.

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  5. I'm glad you didn't follow it, this is perfect :)

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    1. That is what I like about this form. :)

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  7. you don't have to follow the 5-7-5 so long as you capture that moment :)

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  8. I loved the imagery. <3 Thanks for writing a d sharing it. :-)

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  9. Ah. I see it as well as feel it in your haiku and photo.

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  10. Beautiful! The words are well-crafted. :)

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  11. An offer, either don't do prompts, or don't tell me that it is a prompt. :-)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. Haha.. why so? Prompts make it challenging.

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  12. That's beautifull! <3

    Image too! :D I am too too too excited for winters to come!

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    1. Main bhi!!!

      So much love for you and winters.

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  13. I can't find words enough to convey how much I love your word plays. Brilliant!

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    1. You know you always make me smile!

      xox

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