Sunday, October 23, 2011

Have You Played Your Cards?


Penetrating the wall.
Dishevelling the structure.
Caressing it and fondling it.
An enticing touch reached the core.
With words, a game embarked on.
Did you blind me and switch sides?
Or was I only an immature?
The dreams, the aspirations, the beginnings and the endings,
I could not fathom.
Sleeping with the arms around.
Coiling a mirage of bliss.
Curling up more, deeper this time.
Little did I know that I choked.
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19 comments:

  1. Oh, this is deep... nicely written Vinati :D I am not a pro when it comes to poetry, but this is beautiful! :D Mwaah!

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  2. 'The bird that falls flies the highest later.'
    This was pretty.

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  3. "Sleeping with the arms around,
    Coiling a mirage of bliss"
    Reminded me of myself a lot, dunno why:)

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  4. Not sure what you had in mind when you wrote this but I can relate to this unbelievably well...!
    Especially these lines...
    "Did you blind me and switch sides?
    Curling up more, deeper this time.
    Little did I know that I choked."

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  5. @ Mystical Skeptical Me
    I too am not a pro. Not even near to being a pro. But thank you for appreciating. :)

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  6. @ Peevee
    Strange!
    Thanks for reading. :)

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  7. @TheGirlAtFirstAvenue
    I was not in a good state of mind, actually.

    Thank you so much for reading! :)

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  8. ahh! Brutal game i guess.
    Long time, seen you with verses.

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  9. @ Live2cherish
    Brutal and smart!
    Thanks. :)

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  10. "Curling up more, deeper this time.
    Little did I know that I choked."

    Deep, intense and very expressive. Liked it Vinati :)

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  11. Check my second last post, miss. Something awaits you :)

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