Penetrating the wall.
Dishevelling the structure.
Caressing it and fondling it.
An enticing touch reached the core.
With words, a game embarked on.
Did you blind me and switch sides?
Or was I only an immature?
The dreams, the aspirations, the beginnings and the endings,
I could not fathom.
Sleeping with the arms around.
Coiling a mirage of bliss.
Curling up more, deeper this time.
Little did I know that I choked.
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Oh, this is deep... nicely written Vinati :D I am not a pro when it comes to poetry, but this is beautiful! :D Mwaah!
ReplyDelete'The bird that falls flies the highest later.'
ReplyDeleteThis was pretty.
"Sleeping with the arms around,
ReplyDeleteCoiling a mirage of bliss"
Reminded me of myself a lot, dunno why:)
Not sure what you had in mind when you wrote this but I can relate to this unbelievably well...!
ReplyDeleteEspecially these lines...
"Did you blind me and switch sides?
Curling up more, deeper this time.
Little did I know that I choked."
@ Mystical Skeptical Me
ReplyDeleteI too am not a pro. Not even near to being a pro. But thank you for appreciating. :)
@ Crystal
ReplyDeleteThanks!
@ Peevee
ReplyDeleteStrange!
Thanks for reading. :)
@TheGirlAtFirstAvenue
ReplyDeleteI was not in a good state of mind, actually.
Thank you so much for reading! :)
ahh! Brutal game i guess.
ReplyDeleteLong time, seen you with verses.
@ Live2cherish
ReplyDeleteBrutal and smart!
Thanks. :)
loving your blog. :)
ReplyDeleteDeep!!!!:-)
ReplyDelete"Curling up more, deeper this time.
ReplyDeleteLittle did I know that I choked."
Deep, intense and very expressive. Liked it Vinati :)
@ Lizzie
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! :)
@ Rahul
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
Thank you, Sourav! :)
ReplyDeletethats deep :)
ReplyDelete@ Ashutosh
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Check my second last post, miss. Something awaits you :)
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