Saturday, April 28, 2012

Absence.


What if I go?
Leave the rain
Leave that walk in the night
Leave my favourite song behind
Would you remember my idiosyncrasies.
What if I go?
Would you catechize the crumbles of beguiling bond,
Cry or just sit in my favourite corner
And have a talk with the zephyr.

It is not too dreamy, is it?

Then maybe you could just make a promise
To show me a comely reflection
Beneath the countenance of present
That would be my life.
In your hands, when I am gone.
What if I indeed go?
I need you to buy me few breaths
To accompany me on the voyage
Of pretty life and prettier death.
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Now make an effort and hear this. Something which could just touch the deepest cord of the heart. An extremely beautiful composition!


Picture Source: weheartit

23 comments:

  1. An amazing weave of words! Life is always prettier:)

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  2. lovely words and lovely music.
    so glad i came by.

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  3. Dost, I would rather, you do not leave the beautiful bonds, the beautiful night walks, the rain and your favorite songs... so that we can enjoy your idiosyncracies together :D :D

    PS: Beautiful Words - so soothing. Also listen to Yiruma's River Flows in You. It's painfully beautiful :D :D

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    1. Such things are too good to leave...I know!! :)

      Okay!! Shall listen to it right now.. :*
      Thank you friend.

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  4. Oh I love Lindsey Stirling! I can't believe other people know of her!

    And beautiful post. It makes me feel like walking and never looking back.

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    1. Yeah..I came across this young lady's talent few weeks back. She is so enthralling! Hey have you heard Crystallize - Dubstep? That is one of her excellent compositions.

      Thanks a lot for dropping by. :)

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  5. "What if I go?" is probably the most frequent qstn I ask myself in any relationship. I don't know what that says about me, but I'm glad I'm not the only one.

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    1. Hehe...you bet! :D

      But don't worry it says nothing bad about you. Everyone wants to be loved, after all. :-)

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  6. And I came back to your blog again! :D

    I loved this post like the first time I'd read your writing and loved it.

    Keep up the good work! :)

    Love.
    http://inthepourinrain.blogspot.in/

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    1. Hey, aren't you the sweetest? Thank you so much!! ^_^

      I am glad to have you around again.. :-)

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  7. ..and you now have a new follower! :)

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  8. "I need you to buy me few breaths....the voyage" Aaaahhhh...!!
    You= *ishtaar* ^_^

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  9. This was just beautiful, i loved th last three lines a lot "I need you .... prettier death". What if , is a q that is so often asked , in every situation, and often we never get the answers. but i love the way you have described the depth and love of the relation :)

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    1. Thank you sooooo much for a lovely and heartfelt appreciation. I am happy you liked it!! =]

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  10. So So so beautifullly knitted! :)

    I need you to buy me few breaths
    To accompany me on the voyage
    Of pretty life and prettier death. <3

    and woah i need quite a lot of catching up on ur posts.. cant believe i've missed so many of them..!

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    1. That is so sweet of you. :)
      THANKS!!

      XOXO

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  11. What if I go?
    Leave the rain
    Leave that walk in the night
    Leave my favourite song behind

    This was so pretty and so sad at the same time. Loved the poem!

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    1. Thanks a lot Shreya for dropping by. Means a lot. =]

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  12. You're going to publish these. Period.:|

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