Saturday, June 2, 2012

Be a Bird.




Be a bird. Be unfettered and carry me on the wings.
Share the laughter, the mesmerising glee
Lock me up in your arms,
And dive away from the heat
Be a bird. Carry me within you.
With flowing dreams, talk to me the beliefs of love and beyond
Watch the evanescence of the day
And in a natural manner, make me uncover the woven song.

Lose your inhibitions. Be a bird.

16 comments:

  1. Be a bird, that flutters my heart like your words. :D :D Dost, I can read your written word a million times, and every time, they will have the same effect on me. <3 Love it! And I love you!

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    1. Awww...MSM..you are the sweetest!!! I love you too.. dher sara wala meri friend. :-*

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  2. I read it three times over... It's just so beautiful :)
    Felt like I could just see it before me..

    Gosh you should write more often :D

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    1. I have been occupied with a lot of stuff lately. And I realised that I have posted after one whole month. :l

      Gosh you are so right.

      XOXOX

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  3. *Be a Bird, open your wings and soar*
    You create beauty in the realm of your words, Bhola (Budday Wai Girl) :*
    KeEp it up. *proud* :D

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    1. Yesh!! Budday wali girl hu main.. ^_^
      WUHOOOOO!!! XD

      Thank you my loveliestly wali lovely friend. :-*

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  4. Just amazing, Vinati! Reading this though on a vacation and away from home:)Keep writing more often!

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    1. That is so kind of you sir. I will, definitely. :-)

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  5. Be a bird. Fly to the moon and come back.
    Bring me the dust of the silver lining
    Of the cloud we saw as children.
    Be a bird. Love the sky <3

    Beautiful, Vinati :)
    You've really evolved and evolved real quick.

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    1. It's a huge compliment. Thank you SO much Shruti. =) :-*

      And those lines...WOW!! :-)

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  6. Random poetry is always the best.

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    1. And fun too!

      Thanks a lot for dropping by. :-)

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  7. Nice piece of writing... Keep writing more...

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    1. THANK YOU!!!! ^_^

      P.S: Are you on a blog reading spree?? XD

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