Sunday, September 15, 2013

Prompt: Wilted

hazy sunshine
brimming over the
wilted daisies
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4-5-4 pattern

Written for: Haiku Heights

10 comments:


  1. superb start and beautiful images........

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  2. You are making me interested in Haiku. :)

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  3. Poor daisies. Couldn't manage the heat like you've wonderfully managed the topic. Amazing.

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  4. A beautiful take on the prompt. Well-written! :)

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  5. My smiles
    spill over
    this haiku..

    RS:)

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  6. feeling the humidity that can wilt the flowers...

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