:) you've said so much in those words! Beautiful!
Thanks a lot for such kind words. :*
Wish he were at her side to share the cup of tea as well as the happiness. But guess not all things go the planned way...................nicely expressed.
True.. but love lingers in longings too.Thank you for dropping by. :)
Beautiful :) Haiku is definitely challenging and you have done it so well :)
Thank you so much for appreciating the effort. ^_^
'HIS FAVOURITE TEA'Made all the difference! Beautiful!
Haiku is one of my favorites too! I love your usage of words, always! :)
This love.. it's mutual! I'm a fan of your work. :*
haiku's are beautiful, this one anyway.xxdreaming is believing
Thank you Niki =)
A nice way to feel his presence...By sipping his favorite tea...I could feel her love and loneliness...
Thank you for reading. :)
You made every word count in such a beautiful way. Good one~
That is so nice of you. Thanks!
i really loved this mirage. i love how much you are able to say with so little. you have inspired me to learn more about haiku :)
Thanks love.. you must try this! I am sure you will pull it off. :)But haiku is really addictive.. which is why I took a long break from it.
I love the romanticism here. I hope she is not waiting for long...I hope they are reunited.
I hope that too. :)
i have to read twice ! his/her.....and then woosh ! the frog jumps ! its a masterpiece !
Your comment made me so happy.. comparing my work to Basho's, I'm thrilled! Thank you :)
Heart in love seeks comfort in fond memories... wonderfully expressed!!
Thank you Reshma.. :)
oh, i love this one! how just a few words can mean so much..
That is the best thing about haiku.Thanks love :)
I am incapable of being that short and concise, it takes skill and you got it. Nice.
You are so kind. Thank you Ryan for appreciating. :)
i agree with your comment above that haiku is addictive... but i should be so lucky to have it as one of my many vicesxxLuLuBreakfast After 10
=)Thank you for reading Lulu.
I could never write a Haiku that I'm proud of. This one is beautiful. :) Also, I do agree with what you wrote about society. Thank you for passing by.
That is so kind of you. Thank you Zeba!I cannot afford to miss your posts.. :)
Enlighten me a bit more on Haiku please?
Hey thereHaiku is a traditional Japanese form of poetry. It has three lines and usually follow the pattern of 5-7-5, as in first line has five syllables, second- seven syllables and third- five syllables. Haiku can be written to describe any 'aha..' moment :P It could be related to nature as well.You should try it!
yes haiku!♥..this is lovely btw
Thanks Ivette :)
ahaa! what a pleasure to read you and haiku after ages!
Dishitaaaaaa!!! Where were you??? I though I'd lost you.How have you been?
Now this surely is wow ... loved it :-)
Yay! Thanks.. :)
this sunny breeze,that hot tea,this lone windowthat humming bee..this empty chairthat fluttering leaf,this lonely herthat heartening grief!i knw i knw nt that gud.. still :)
That is quite a thoughtful comment. :D
that was d intention.. :p