Saturday, May 24, 2014

Saline words on our abandoned sheet.


Because it was the night that whispered endearments in my ear instead of your beautiful mouth and scented sighs, it was the surging silence that implored to be hugged by the midnight love instead of your arms that once found their place around my slender frame. It was a sinuous moment unfaithfully bent at the juncture when it all fell apart, a wilted nonsense of caricatured dreams meekly dissecting our little heads. But I stayed.. stuck and dispersed like saline words on our abandoned sheet; reminiscing the jaded moments, the lost kisses, the discarded hugs that fluttered across the burnt pages while you rebuilt the night's charm with a wistful start and an open end.
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26 comments:

  1. Beautiful... But I stayed.. stuck and dispersed like saline words on our abandoned sheet.. Wow...

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  2. This is beautiful! Especially the last two lines <3
    x

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  3. you use such beautiful words :)

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  4. This is really beautiful x

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  5. THE PAIN...I had to read this thrice.. BEAUTIFUL...Its aches!

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    1. It so does!

      So glad you liked it. :)

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  6. "a sinuous moment unfaithfully bent at the juncture when it all fell apart". *sigh*

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  7. Ouch, open end! Breaks my heart, it is that beautiful.

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  8. Wooooooooow ... this is what you call a beautiful play of words ... metaphorical and deep ... awesomeness :-)

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    1. I wrote it as a poem but later changed it to prose. It felt better this way. :)

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  10. oh my goodness... i loved every line.

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    1. Yes! We are sucker for love and we always stay.

      <3

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