Sunday, June 29, 2014

Naivety.


Tell me, why do you cringe?

Life and death are as amusing as you and I,
embalmed in a labyrinth
which doesn't make sense.

No, it doesn't make sense.
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28 comments:

  1. Hey vinati:):) I discovered ur blog quite a few months ago and now I m completely hooked to it.. u write FAB

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    1. *.*
      That is sooooo sweet of you. Thank you Juhi!

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  2. Amazing lines and very profound too! I just loveee your poems..I wish I could write such superb verses!

    Loved it esp the last lines :)

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    1. You are so sweet for saying that Ankita. Means soooo much to me.
      xx

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  3. It sure doesn't make sense. Better to just go with the flow!

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    1. Yes!
      Sadly, that is what we've been doing since forever.

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  4. Sometimes we try to make sense of things that sense and rationality do not apply to. Beautifully written...

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    1. Because we are humans and we question everything.

      Thank you! :)

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  5. These could be lyrics of a beautiful song :-)

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  6. Have I told you lately that I love you? I really do. Yours is one of my favourite blogs. I think I have mentioned that before too.
    This was beautiful.

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    1. Red!!! This is too overwhelming. :')

      I love you more!

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  7. The lines are too profound that they enthrall and make me understand another dimension writing. Hats off.

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    1. Thank you Keirthana! Your feedback always makes me super happy.

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  8. Ouch! Hurts but it makes sense. This post I mean :)

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  9. But it does. Try? :-)

    Best of luck with the internship.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. Only in the happy sunlit days, it does.

      Thank you BA!! But the internship thing did not happen.

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  10. "embalmed in a labyrinth"...

    We are truly that... but isn't that beautiful...and now I understand what the words, "why do you cringe?" connote. Wonderful! <3 Pyaar hai tumhare shabdo se mujhe! :D

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  11. Hey
    Have nominated you for the quintet of radiance award
    http://www.doomedwriters.blogspot.in/2014/07/quintet-of-radiance-award.html

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    1. Wow.. thankyousomuch Juhi!!! I am honored.

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  12. This is chilling, and so true ... sometimes, life doesn't make any sense, but we have to accept it ... awesome !!!!

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