Thursday, September 12, 2013

Prompt: Holy

white foaming rush
shunning aside sins
a holy dip
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4-5-4 pattern

Written for: Haiku Heights

24 comments:

  1. Amazingly written. Love the second line.

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  2. beautiful 4-5-4 haiku and a beautiful blog too. Well done.

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  3. A beautiful thought 'shunning aside sins.' Loved it.

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  4. That was a beautiful composition Vinati:)

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  5. Ha! That's wat is believed...
    And widely followed...

    Nice!

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  6. Holy dip in the Ganges to dissolve the sins. What about polluting the Ganges?

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  7. Vinati jee. :) I hope you remember me! Long time, huh? Kaise ho?
    "shunning aside sins", ahem! Wonderfully written! Feels nice to visit your blog after a long time <3

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    1. Arey ap yaha??? I thought you have disappeared somewhere deep and do not plan to return ever.

      Nice to see you too mister. :)
      I've been good here. How have you been?

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  8. Another beautiful piece.

    I'm not getting updates from your blog. :/
    But Mirage looks more beautiful now. :')-

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    1. Thanks love.

      Yes, many are facing this problem.
      Don't have any solution. :(

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  9. Loooooooooooooove the new look!! I love it absolutely!! And yes, brilliant Haiku too!! :*

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