Saturday, January 21, 2012

Loosen Up a Little. Pretty Please?


Oust the fret outside the gates
You look better with that killer spark.
Embrace all that I have to make you smile
For your smile surpasses the darkest of the dark.

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Picture source: wehearit
Current song: Send me an angel by Scorpions.

20 comments:

  1. This applies directly to me right about now:) Very sweet <3

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  2. yeah really sweet..love the second and the last line the most :)

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  3. Very very sweet :) Loved it so much..

    Cheers,
    Keirthana
    http://keirthana.in/blog

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  4. What can I say? Everything, title, pic and the content, it's beautiful!

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  5. liked the last line the best.

    keep it goin;)

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    1. New here right? WELCOME!!

      And thanks for the appreciation. Means a lot.

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  6. Vinati, those were beautiful words..

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    1. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. :)

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  7. Beautiful as usual! You are amazing when it comes to short poetry!

    ♥ www.thegirlatfirstavenue.com

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  8. So beautifully written! Let me quote "..your smile surpasses the darkest of the dark." Wow! loved it. :)

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