Sunday, January 29, 2012

Crimson.



Metal souls at war
Fed on bullets and dressed with
That crimson water.

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Written for: 104th prompt at Haiku Heights.
Picture Source: deviantart

38 comments:

  1. Very powerful, and greates a shiver down one's spine.

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    1. Thanks a lot for dropping by and appreciating the post. :)

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  2. And too much of that crimson water flowing around, sadly!

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  3. It sent a shiver down my spine!
    And the way you have written it is just wow! :)

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    1. Thank you for appreciating the effort. =)

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    1. I recently attended a rehearsal of the beating retreat at Vijay Chowk, New Delhi and was so moved by the essence of that moment that I had to look for an outlet. And so the post.

      Thank you for your kind comment. :)

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  5. Like a karate chop, this..

    Brilliant.

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  6. this is powerful and speaks a hell lot, really made me pause for a while.....

    here is mine

    http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2012/01/lifes-simple-realities-crimson.html

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    1. Glad you stopped by. Thanks!

      Off to your blog now. :)

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  7. metal souls seems so harsh re. But loved the way you weaved it to strong message.

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  8. crimson water, what a lovely imagery.

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  9. Best in brief-so you as always! :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot Smita!! I am really glad. :) :)

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    1. Thanks a lot to you too Keirthana!! :* :)

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